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11 August 2006 @ 03:16 pm
Title: Wrong
Ships: Harry/Ron, Hermione
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: Say it with me now ~ me ... don't ... own.
Summary: Hermione knew she shouldn’t even be thinking about what she had already made up her mind to do.
Authors Notes: This is my first attempt at slashy smut, so be kind. :O)
50_smutlets prompt: Voyeurism


It was wrong on so many levels. Hermione knew she shouldn’t even be thinking about what she had already made up her mind to do. But she had to know. She had to see.

She had to know how they moved that caused the bed to bang against the wall. She had to know what they did that caused the moans and sighs and pants she heard. She had to know what they said that caused the content smiles they passed between each other every morning.

So she searched and found a spell that would cause the wall between her room and Ron and Harry’s room to go transparent for her and remain solid for them.

Hermione excuses herself early, wanting to make sure she doesn’t miss anything and needing time to prepare the spell. Then she sits on her bed and waits.

Harry and Ron come crashing into their room, joined at the mouth. They tear at each others clothes and undress each other, barely needing to break their kiss. Hermione is captivated by how practiced and knowledgeable they are. They stand there, fully naked, rubbing their full cocks against each other, groaning at the sensation. Their hands wander all over the place, from hair to chest to back to arse to cock and back again.

They shift over to the bed, falling down onto it, Harry above Ron. They seem content to just make out for a bit, kisses so intense and deep and sloppy. It isn’t pretty, and that is what is amazing about it. They are wrapped up in sensations and that is what is beautiful.

Harry breaks the kiss, moving down Ron’s body, placing sporadic kisses on his body. He sits and reaches to the bedside table and squeezes some liquid onto his hand. Hermione watches as Ron places his feet flat on the mattress, lifting his hips off the bed. Harry positions himself between his legs, preparing him. Then Harry leans over Ron, locking their eyes as he enters.

They sigh, Ron’s eyelids actually fluttering. Ron hooks his legs over Harry’s shoulders, giving him better access, and Hermione blinks at how flexible he is before she forgets everything apart from the way they are rocking together. Their bodies glisten and their breath comes in short pants. They are looking at each other and their breathing quickens and their bodies convulse and they groan as the come.

Hermione is transfixed. Harry withdraws and collapses on the bed beside Ron. They are sticky and messy but they ignore that as they lay together, Harry’s palm on Ron’s face, thumb ghosting over the arch of his cheek, looking into each others eyes as they whisper things Hermione can’t hear.

With a whisper the enchantment is over and Hermione’s wall turns opaque. She sits there, unmoving, feeling a thousand things at once. Guilt, for spying on her best friends. Shock, for what she has just seen. Overwhelmed, for all the things it has made her feel.

She blindly reaches out and turns off the light and crawls under her covers. But she can’t sleep. Her whole body is tingling, alive. She is wet and aroused and on edge, images of what she has just witnessed flashing in her minds eye.

So she slips a hand under her knickers. She begins to touch, light and gentle at first. She places her other hand on her breast, stroking and kneading, pinching her taut nipple. Then she begins to move her fingers, rubbing her clit, inserting fingers inside herself. She shuts her eyes, seeing black and red hair, tongues, cocks, sweaty skin, rough hands. She comes with a gasp, shaking as the orgasm washes over her.

Afterwards, as she lies there alone in bed, she can’t believe that she actually went through with it. That she actually spied on her two best friends fucking. It was wrong on so many levels. But with a smile she thinks, It may be wrong, but it was damn hot.
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Alexi J. Lupin: James//Header Match [DO NOT STEAL PLEASEalexi_lupin on August 11th, 2006 06:48 am (UTC)
I would totally do that, I have to say.

HOT. I liked it. =D
TattooedSiren: harryron boystattooedsiren on August 11th, 2006 06:49 am (UTC)
I dont think anyone can really blame Hermione for doing it. :O)

Thanks for reading!
Alexi J. Lupin: Misc.//Nobody Expects the iInquisition!alexi_lupin on August 11th, 2006 06:58 am (UTC)
Hee. Harry's face in your icon cracks me up for some reason. =D
TattooedSiren: harryron boystattooedsiren on August 11th, 2006 01:20 pm (UTC)
Both their expressions crack me up. :O)
letmypidgeonsgoletmypidgeonsgo on August 11th, 2006 07:10 am (UTC)
oh lord, teh hottttness! & this + shocolate's voyeur!hermione smutlet in one day? are you people trying to kill me?!
TattooedSiren: trio splittattooedsiren on August 11th, 2006 01:20 pm (UTC)
Yes, yes we are. *grins*
narnialovers on August 11th, 2006 08:19 am (UTC)
That was freaking HOT and wonderfully well written! I LOVE H/R!*____*
TattooedSiren: harryron =)tattooedsiren on August 11th, 2006 01:23 pm (UTC)
Thanks sweetie. :O)

mrsquizzical: triomrsquizzical on August 11th, 2006 10:36 am (UTC)
well, you can hardly blame her?!?!?!
TattooedSiren: ron gryftattooedsiren on August 11th, 2006 01:23 pm (UTC)
Not at all. :O)
John Carterbrumeux77 on August 11th, 2006 01:43 pm (UTC)
Nice and hot. I definitely enjoyed it. But the random tense change from past to present was a little disconcerting.
TattooedSiren: harry thinkingnaughtythoughtstattooedsiren on August 11th, 2006 01:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks. The past tense was kind of like the setup and the present tense was when the fic really started. But I see what you mean. Thanks for the crit.
the naughty librarian: fistedflaminiag on August 11th, 2006 11:34 pm (UTC)
It may be wrong, but it was damn hot.

Yep. That pretty much sums it up.
Nicely done! :)
TattooedSiren: harry trymetattooedsiren on August 11th, 2006 11:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much. :O)
compos_dementiscompos_dementis on August 12th, 2006 04:17 am (UTC)

Hot! I'm going to have to wrap my seat in plastic with all the smut I read.

It was fantastic. Hermione really is a Harry/Ron shipper.

Can you blame her? I mean, honestly...
TattooedSiren: trio watchtowerlyricstattooedsiren on August 12th, 2006 06:57 am (UTC)
Thanks so much. And no, I dont blame her, I envy her... :O)
compos_dementiscompos_dementis on August 13th, 2006 03:04 am (UTC)
Tell me about it. I want to witness teh Harry/Ron smut, damnit! *glares at Hermione*

Nicolestar2954 on August 13th, 2006 05:56 am (UTC)
*is dead*

I dont ship Harry/Ron usually, but omfg that was HOT!!! Hermione was SO right. This was great hun, made my day.
TattooedSiren: ron gryftattooedsiren on August 13th, 2006 07:31 am (UTC)
*grins* Thanks for reading - glad you liked it.
Sabinesabine91175 on January 23rd, 2007 11:07 pm (UTC)
Hope this makes sense...
I never can think of pretty praise, though I so wish I could. Therefore, let me say 'Very Nicely Done'. And also you should know that this is now part of my 'Favorite fics and recs' section of my memories. :D
TattooedSiren: harry thinkingnaughtythoughtstattooedsiren on January 24th, 2007 02:03 am (UTC)
Re: Hope this makes sense...
Awww, thanks. Reccing is a great compliment and a great review. :O)