09 September 2006 @ 05:25 pm
Tell Me (cookie)  
Title: Tell Me
Ships: Remus/Hermione
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: Say it with me now ~ me ... don't ... own.
Summary: "Tell me you don’t want me."
Authors Notes: I really don't think it needs to be said but just in case, this is Seventh Year AU. Enjoy!
[info]50_smutlets prompt: School



Tell me

Remus looked up in surprise as the door to his office opened. Hermione slipped silently through the door, closing it behind her.

“I locked that door,” Remus said, standing from the desk and coming around to stand in front of it.

Hermione smiled, muttering an incantation at the thick wooden door. “Now it’s locked.” She walked towards him, slowly and deliberately. “Tell me you don’t want me.”

He blinked. “I don’t want you,” he said, his voice low.

Hermione reached him, placing her hands on his stomach, staring into his eyes. “Tell me to leave.”

Remus swallowed. “Leave, Hermione.”

She undid his belt, unbuttoned his trousers and slid her hand into his boxers, grasping him. “Tell me to stop.”

He kept his eyes locked on hers. She began stroking him and his heart began thumping in his chest. His breath came out in a shudder. He leaned down, his face so close to hers that they breathed the same breath, and his lips brushed hers as he whispered, “Stop.”

He captured her lips, devouring her. She thrust her tongue into his mouth, pushing his trousers and boxers down to his ankles. He gripped her hips, pulling her against him. She continued pumping his cock as they backed up until Hermione’s back hit the door. He found the zip to her skirt and pulled it down, allowing the skirt to fall to the floor. He kissed down her neck, hooking his thumbs into her boyleg shorts and pushing them down her legs. She stepped out of them as she claimed his mouth with hers.

He removed her hand from him, placing her arms around his neck. He gripped her sides and with a surprising strength he lifted her from the floor. She hooked her legs around him and when he lowered her onto him, they both sighed.

Hermione buried her face in Remus’s neck as she began grinding against him. He braced her against the door as they thrust against one another. It was fast and urgent and Remus loved the little noises Hermione was making. She threw her head back against the door, Remus taking advantage and running his tongue along her neck.

Breathing heavy, Hermione cried out as she came, tightening around him. Remus had held off as long as he could and came with a groan.

They stilled, panting, still joined. They looked at each other, smiling. Remus pressed his lips to hers and set Hermione back onto the ground, her legs shaky.

Hermione reached up and caressed his cheek. “Tell me you don’t love me.”

Remus shook his head. Pressing his forehead to hers, he whispered, “I love you.”
 
 
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Currently singing along to: Amen - Paula Cole
 
 
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Alexi J. Lupin: HP//I Love Moony[info]alexi_lupin on September 9th, 2006 08:57 am (UTC)
Holy crap that was hot.

And I wish it would happen to me. *sigh*

And wow, Emma looks...odd in your pic.
TattooedSiren: davidthewlis light[info]tattooedsiren on September 9th, 2006 09:45 am (UTC)
Thanks sweetie. :O) And dont we all?

Emma doesnt look odd. Different, yes, odd, no.
Alexi J. Lupin: HP//Hogwarts Inquisition[info]alexi_lupin on September 9th, 2006 10:36 am (UTC)
Yeah...I coudn't think of any appropriate words. I guess I said odd because I've never seen her like that before.

TattooedSiren: lucy queen[info]tattooedsiren on September 9th, 2006 10:28 pm (UTC)
I really like the pic (obviously - or I wouldnt have it as an icon *grins*). I think she looks good - and I like that its different. And I love her hair in it. :O)
Abandon hope all ye who enter here[info]sekhmet2 on September 9th, 2006 12:49 pm (UTC)
Evil woman. You're going to drag me into the Dark Side of Remus Het Fic, aren't you? ::clings desperately to Remus/Sirius slash:: Nooooooo!!!!

Seriously, this was incredibly hot and beautifully written. Quite a nice way to start my morning: Cup O'Coffee and Hot Smut. Breakfast of champions, wouldn't you say? ;-)
TattooedSiren: hermione excited[info]tattooedsiren on September 9th, 2006 10:36 pm (UTC)
Yes, yes I am. *drags you over to the Remus/Hermione camp*

Thanks so much for reading. I adore Remus/Hermione and loved that you read it even though you are into Remus slash. If you are open to Remus/Hermione I have a heap of fics you can check out.

Smut always makes any meal better. :O)
Abandon hope all ye who enter here[info]sekhmet2 on September 10th, 2006 03:11 am (UTC)
Arrrrgggghhhhhh.....nooooooo!!! ::looks around:: Oh, alright, I'm here. Bring on the smut.

I have to say, Hermione was always the only one I could ever really see Remus with. (Besides Sirius, of course... ::evil cackle::) Can't stand Tonks. I'd love to see those fics as well; you're a very talented writer and I've so enjoyed everything that I've read so far. If they're half as lovely as this one and your James/Georgie & Tumnus/Lucy fics, then I have no doubts that I'll enjoy them immensely.

Indeed it does. Everyone could benefit from a steady diet of smut. ::nods::

TattooedSiren: trio intheend[info]tattooedsiren on September 10th, 2006 04:41 am (UTC)
*grins* Yay - conversion complete.

When I first read Remus/Hermione it was a time-turner fic and my first reaction was 'OMG this makes so much sense'. I'm not a huge fan of Remus/Tonks (I'm actually not a huge fan of most canon ships) and I think the main reason is I just cant see him with anyone but Hermione. Anyway, check out my fics and let me know what you think - here
Alexi J. Lupin: DW//Doctor - What The...?[info]alexi_lupin on October 1st, 2006 03:41 am (UTC)
Would that be because most Canon ships kinda suck? =D

Hehehe.
TattooedSiren: trio split[info]tattooedsiren on October 1st, 2006 05:47 am (UTC)
*is not saying a word* :O)
Alexi J. Lupin: James//Smile - Looks Like Chris[info]alexi_lupin on October 1st, 2006 09:43 am (UTC)
*is going to, for better or worse, take that as a 'yes', until told otherwise*
Dizzy[info]caitlen on September 9th, 2006 05:57 pm (UTC)
wooooooohooo hot and steamy!!! nice!
TattooedSiren: remushermione maths[info]tattooedsiren on September 9th, 2006 10:37 pm (UTC)
Thankyou. *grins*
Sam: Gilmore Girls - Dance[info]chocky_mousse on September 10th, 2006 01:22 am (UTC)
An awesome read, well done. =)
TattooedSiren: davidthewlis naked[info]tattooedsiren on September 10th, 2006 01:36 am (UTC)
Thanks sweetie. :O)
Lorraine Bluestar: Beauty[info]lorraineblue on September 10th, 2006 02:40 am (UTC)
Rachel, I have to be completely honest with you. Anyone might think that this was only a PWP, a chance to read a quick interlude between Hermione and Remus. But if they look closely they'll find this and realise a couple of things...

Hermione reached up and caressed his cheek. “Tell me you don't love me.”

Remus shook his head. Pressing his forehead to hers, he whispered, “I love you.”


See? With you it will never be about a quick shag for the characters, it's always about love. The way Hermione asked him to tell her to leave or stop, and how he answered her despite doing the contrary was beautiful. But the last couple of lines when he told her he loved her was my undoing.

*sighs happily* I'm glad I'm back reading your stuff and commenting it. Thanks for sharing, dear.

*hugs*
TattooedSiren: hermione fallen[info]tattooedsiren on September 10th, 2006 03:05 am (UTC)
Awww ... thankyou sweetie. I love PWP as much as the next person and although there is no plot here, I cant just write smut without any kind of emotion, especially when it comes to Remus/Hermione.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Nicole[info]star2954 on September 10th, 2006 04:26 am (UTC)
I love everything you write, and this is certainly no exception, nothing like hot smut with a side of romance. It's lovely hun. THANK YOU I needed some good R/Hr.
TattooedSiren: remushermione maths[info]tattooedsiren on September 10th, 2006 04:37 am (UTC)
Thankyou very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :O)
mrs_remus: Cheeky - Divorcing Jack[info]mrs_remus on September 10th, 2006 03:33 pm (UTC)
GOD, that was so brilliant! And very very hot :D
TattooedSiren: davidthewlis[info]tattooedsiren on September 11th, 2006 08:06 am (UTC)
Thanks so much sweetie.

[info]_youngblood_ on September 11th, 2006 05:02 am (UTC)
Ahhh...

Not my pairing, but... wow. Wow.
TattooedSiren: remushermione maths[info]tattooedsiren on September 11th, 2006 08:07 am (UTC)
Thankyou. *plots to convert you to Remus/Hermione*
Atratus[info]atratuslupin on September 11th, 2006 09:55 pm (UTC)
That was hot. I love it. That icon is neat too. ^.^
TattooedSiren: remushermione maths[info]tattooedsiren on September 12th, 2006 08:07 am (UTC)
Thankyou very much. :O)
chasedestructo: Hermione Gryffindor[info]chasedestructo on September 22nd, 2006 12:47 pm (UTC)
Brilliant, Hot and steamy and god I love this paring... *swoons* Thanks sweetie:)
TattooedSiren: remushermione maths[info]tattooedsiren on September 22nd, 2006 10:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks very much sweetie. And its good to see you around again. :O)
//In the Dark I Still Have You\\: ballet fred[info]eclipsed_sky on October 10th, 2006 10:27 pm (UTC)
Your fic is HOT! And also very very good. I was wondering if you would mind if I friended you. I am quiet in love with both your fic and art and I would love to watch out for more.
TattooedSiren: davidthewlis sitting[info]tattooedsiren on October 11th, 2006 08:08 am (UTC)
Thankyou very much. And of course I dont mind you friending me - thats what I'm here for. :O)
//In the Dark I Still Have You\\: H/D Fine Line[info]eclipsed_sky on October 11th, 2006 10:54 am (UTC)
Great, some people find it weird if randoms friend them. I didn't want to scare you or anything. *laughs*